自學(xué)高教自考英語(yǔ)翻譯技巧5

　　所謂加詞就是根據(jù)原文的思想內(nèi)涵透過(guò)文字表達(dá)上的表面現(xiàn)象，充分照顧到另一種語(yǔ)言的文法特征、描述規(guī)律，在將其翻譯成另一種語(yǔ)言時(shí)該加詞的地方加詞，該減詞的地方減詞，千萬(wàn)不可以為了可以追求所謂的“精練、簡(jiǎn)潔”而隨隨便便地減詞；也不可以離開(kāi)原文，憑空膩測(cè)，隨隨便便加詞。具體地說(shuō)：

　　加詞：

　　I.由于詞匯方面的原因而引起的加詞現(xiàn)象：1.加動(dòng)詞由于英語(yǔ)是一門“靜止”的語(yǔ)言，在所有的詞匯當(dāng)中，用名詞的居多；而相比較而言，漢語(yǔ)則無(wú)此限制，不管有多少動(dòng)詞都可以并排使用。因此，許多英語(yǔ)的名詞翻譯成漢語(yǔ)時(shí)都要加上一些動(dòng)詞，否則，意思則很不完整，例如：a. But by 1981 he had to have further surgery on his hand. And a month later， he suffered as stroke. （到了1981年，他的手不得不又做了一次手術(shù)。一個(gè)月以后，他又中風(fēng)了。）

　　b. His speech in at the meeting turned out exert an stimulating effect on the mind of the people present that day. （他那天在會(huì)上所做的報(bào)告使所有在場(chǎng)的人深受鼓舞。）

　　c. He maintain that only hard work and unswerving perseverance can lead to improved performance.（他堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為，只有通過(guò)勤奮工作加上不懈的努力才會(huì)取得好的成績(jī)。）

　　d. The lives claimed by shoddy construction projects should be enough to put governments at all levels on the alert. （偽劣建筑奪取了很多人的生命，這一點(diǎn)足以使我們的各級(jí)部門提高警惕。）

　　e. Efforts must be made to improve service for more than 1 million domestic and overseas tourists. （為了一百萬(wàn)的國(guó)內(nèi)外旅客的利益，我們一定為改善服務(wù)質(zhì)量而進(jìn)行努力。）

　　f. You ought to know better than to go swimming straight after a meal.（你不應(yīng)該一吃過(guò)飯，馬上就去游泳，這是很不明智的。）

　　2.加名詞：在漢語(yǔ)中，及物和不及物動(dòng)詞的區(qū)別不是很明顯，有時(shí)所謂及物動(dòng)詞后面的賓語(yǔ)如果上下文中能夠看的出，往往可以省略不說(shuō)；而英語(yǔ)則不然。由于英語(yǔ)對(duì)及物動(dòng)詞和不及物動(dòng)詞的區(qū)別很明顯，因此翻譯成漢語(yǔ)時(shí)則很麻煩。特別是一些不及物動(dòng)詞必須帶上它后面的賓語(yǔ)句子意思才能顯得完整。因此，我們?cè)诜g時(shí)往往就需要增補(bǔ)。

　　a. Make a schedule or chart of you time and fill in committed time such as eating ，playing ， meetings ， classes， etc. （作一個(gè)時(shí)間表，然后，將吃飯、睡覺(jué)、開(kāi)會(huì)、上課等等的時(shí)間填上。）

　　b. It was two hours before the old couple mustered up enough courage to get up and called the police and they explained that they‘d done that after much deliberation.（直到兩個(gè)小時(shí)以后，那對(duì)老夫妻才有勇氣敢從床上爬起來(lái)給警察打電話，并解釋說(shuō)那也是經(jīng)過(guò)仔細(xì)考慮才敢作的。）

　　c.這見(jiàn)事?lián)f(shuō)是一個(gè)組織嚴(yán)密團(tuán)伙干的。

　?。═he operation is believed to be the work of a well-organized organized group. ）

　　d.我是為友誼和求學(xué)而來(lái)。

　　（I came here in the spirit of friendship and learning. ）

　　有時(shí)形容詞前面也可以加上名詞：e. His wife thinks that this furniture is too expensive and ， moreover looks very ugly.（他妻子認(rèn)為，這件家具價(jià)格昂貴而且外表難看。）

　　f. I thus appeared to them to be quite familiar with this sort of situation and it confirmed them in their belief that I was a thoroughly disreputable character.（然后，我繼續(xù)裝著對(duì)這種事情很內(nèi)行的樣子，結(jié)果更使他們認(rèn)定我是一個(gè)名聲很壞的人。）

　　有時(shí)，一些名詞或者數(shù)量詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式翻譯成漢語(yǔ)后前面也要加詞表示重疊：g. Thousands of students from the city‘s colleges and universities jammed the railway station awaiting the arrival of their football team. （成千上萬(wàn)的高校學(xué)生一起涌到火車站歡迎他們的足球隊(duì)凱旋。

　　h. These she bought the medical supplies with the large sums of money given to her by many friends to help her in the Crimea （她用朋友們給她的一筆筆錢購(gòu)買醫(yī)療設(shè)備。）

　　i. To look after the hordes of sick men there were only a few old doctor who were helpless before such scene of suffering and misery. （只有這些老醫(yī)生來(lái)照看一群群的傷員，他們?cè)谌绱说耐纯唷⒈瘋媲?，顯得無(wú)可奈何。

　　3.加代詞：這里的代詞主要是指作動(dòng)詞賓語(yǔ)的代詞，因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)中的所有及物動(dòng)詞都必須帶有賓語(yǔ)，所以漢語(yǔ)翻譯成英語(yǔ)時(shí)也需要增補(bǔ)：a. If you like this novel ， I can lend it to you.（如果你喜歡這本小說(shuō)，我可以借給你。）

　　b. I think she‘d appreciate it if we all helped out a bit more.（我覺(jué)得如果我們能幫她一把，她回很感激的。）

　　c. Would you please look for the key once more？ I remembered clearly putting it in the drawer last time. （能不能再找一遍鑰匙？我記得上次放在抽屜里了。）

　　4.加連詞和介詞：漢語(yǔ)可以通過(guò)上下文來(lái)連接句與句之間的邏輯關(guān)系，而英語(yǔ)則靠一些連接詞來(lái)完成：a. If you want to go， I would give you my advice that you take an umbrella.（你要去，我建議你別忘了帶把傘。）

　　b. Since its opening five years ago ， the shop has attracted a lot of customers.（這家商店五年前開(kāi)業(yè)以來(lái)，吸引了大批顧客。）

　　c. Since the beginning of this century， more and more scientists have become interested in the way the human brain works. （本世紀(jì)以來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的科學(xué)家已經(jīng)開(kāi)始對(duì)人腦活動(dòng)的方式感興趣。）

　　d. His friends asked him to write them as soon as he got there. （他的朋友要他到了那兒就給他們寫信。）

　　e. He went so far as to cheat openly on test. （他居然敢公開(kāi)作弊。）

　　f. The factory has decided to mass-produce the equipment at a low cost. （這家工廠已經(jīng)決定低成本、大批量的生產(chǎn)這種儀器。）

　　g. Why was he absent from school yesterday？

　　（他昨天為什么不上學(xué)？）

　　h. The older leader gave us the suggestion that we be free from arrogance and rashness.（老領(lǐng)導(dǎo)告戒我們要戒驕戒躁。）

　　i. This ， he said， deprived him of his civil rights ， and he asked for $150，000 in damages. （他說(shuō)，這等于是剝奪了他的公民權(quán)力，因此申請(qǐng)$150，000 的賠償。）

　　j. His marriage suffered and ended in divorce.（他的婚姻也受到影響，最后還是離了婚。）

　　k. After a few rounds of talks， both sides regarded the territory dispute as settled.（幾輪會(huì)談以后，雙方認(rèn)為邊界問(wèn)題可以解決了。）

　　l. As her year as chief resident drew to a close， Mrs. White decided to specialize in children ‘s diseases. （在她作住院總醫(yī)師要結(jié)束時(shí)，懷特太太決定專攻病理。）

　　5.下面的一些句子則是為了修辭目的而加詞：a. He was sentenced as much as six months in jail for drunk driving.（他因酗酒駕駛而被判入獄半年。）

　　b. As many as twenty people were killed in the accident yesterday.（二十個(gè)人在昨天的事故當(dāng)中喪生。）

　　c. I came here as early as eight o‘clock this morning. （我今天八點(diǎn)鐘就來(lái)了。）

　　6 . 在某些作定語(yǔ)的不定式結(jié)構(gòu)中，介詞有時(shí)需要加上：a. I‘d like to find someone to play with （我想找人玩。）

　　b. Would you please pass me a piece of paper to write on. （你能否遞張紙給我，我想寫點(diǎn)東西。）

　　c. Totally alone in the room， her mother wanted to find someone to talk to （她媽媽覺(jué)得一個(gè)人在房間里太孤單了，想找個(gè)人說(shuō)說(shuō)話。）

　　7.某些獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)中：With a book in his hand ， the teacher came into the class. （老師走了進(jìn)來(lái)，手里拿本書。）

　　8.加副詞a. They started up into the sky until the noise of the rocket died away.（他猛地抬頭往天空看，直到火箭發(fā)射的聲音漸漸遠(yuǎn)去。）

　　b. He stole a glance at the pretty girl walking alongside with him. （他偷偷地瞥了他一眼。）

　　9.有時(shí)還要根據(jù)實(shí)際需要，加上一些表示“范疇”的詞，即表示籠統(tǒng)意思的單詞，意見(jiàn)、想法、道理等等。

　　a. The cultivation of a hobby and new forms of interest is therefore a policy of first importance to a public man. But this is not a business that can be undertaken in day or swiftly improvised by a mere command of the will. （因此，對(duì)社會(huì)活動(dòng)家來(lái)說(shuō)，培養(yǎng)業(yè)余愛(ài)好和新的興趣就成為頭等重要的事情了。但這不是一蹴而就的事情，也不能單靠毅力就能臨時(shí)湊成。）

　　b. A situation in which such a large number of students cheat openly on the exam and escape punishment is very dangerous and cannot last long（如此多的學(xué)生作弊，居然沒(méi)人管，是很危險(xiǎn)的，也不可能持久。）

　　c. So he began to study the children‘s responses in situation where no milk was provided（所以，他開(kāi)始研究小孩子得不到牛奶時(shí)的反應(yīng)是什么樣的。）

　　以上的幾句雖然沒(méi)有“局面”、“情況”等詞，但